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I really liked it! My main problems with it are the fast pace and the delays lingering a little too long, but other than that it’s really good!
It is a very enjoyable story! I liked the spin on the end that you are considered so important that Neo is sent to help you, it made me feel like I was a hero in the story. If I had to suggest one change though, it would be to the pacing of the story. It felt good and flowed well, but I also feel like it could have been taken a little slower. The fast pace of it though also leads to the character being pulled from one place to the next and having no time to process what’s going on, which makes it feel more real as well.
Fun ride!